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MESSAGE TO HER

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1default MESSAGE TO HER في 25/6/2008, 3:48 am

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This is an attempt of writing an English poem


I wrote it after the examination of translation because there was an event that made my heart expressed it.


THE POEM (MESSAGE TO HER)

Tell the rose, that she knows
How it was, How it goes
sea was wide, needs no guide
Yet the ship, has wrecked inside
And no hide will balk aside

Rain was embedded in our space
Yet couldn't find where do you place
Emotive love, stood with no base
And soppy truth, deceived its face

Dare or not, I know, .... Don't care
Save your tears, beneath the snare

My way, with you, will go no where
I swear to you, faithful I swear
My life, with you, will go no where
My love, to you, has been killed here


( I AM SORRY )

thanks fo reading



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2default رد: MESSAGE TO HER في 25/6/2008, 4:36 am

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WHOZ SHE
Question Exclamation Question
Wink Wink Wink

thanx 4the nice poem

I'll give it 2 Dr.Rakish 2 tell me the proposition and the poetic logic

It'z really nice 2 have the talent of writing poetry n both languages

GO ON BRO

Very Happy

3default رد: MESSAGE TO HER في 26/6/2008, 2:29 am

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Hey man, don't say that you're just embarssing me .... and I think it's not that diffecult to be understood, it doesn't need for doctor Rakish to identify the propsition and discuss the poetic logic

Brother..... I'm not Eliot or Yeats or Keat.... I'm just a simple person used some simple words to express something that is burning inside of his heart.

Thank you So much brother

OH.... about the question that u asked..... WHo is she.....

my only answer that can be delivered here is that

SHE KNOWS HERSELF AND KNOWS WHY DID I WRITE THIS POEM

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4default رد: MESSAGE TO HER في 26/6/2008, 3:07 pm

wow soooooooooooooooo nice she is lucky to someone loves her so deeply Very Happy Razz
really its very nice poem i like it my self i will keep it by heart bounce Surprised
tnx bro 4 the great effort i appreciated
go ahead


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5default رد: MESSAGE TO HER في 26/6/2008, 7:37 pm

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Bird you are genious
so you wrote this one by your self
now, i believe that you are talented
ما شا لله عليك

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6default رد: MESSAGE TO HER في 27/6/2008, 3:08 am

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whisper of the heart كتب:wow soooooooooooooooo nice she is lucky to someone loves her so deeply Very Happy Razz
really its very nice poem i like it my self i will keep it by heart bounce Surprised
tnx bro 4 the great effort i appreciated
go ahead

Thank you so much (Whisper of the heart) ofcourse no one is gonna understand the speech of the heart except that person who even can hear the whisper of it or even pronounce it....
I'm really so happy that u admired the poem and really I appreciate your reply and as I told you before.... I hope that u stay as you are .. never change ....

Wish you the best

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7default رد: MESSAGE TO HER في 27/6/2008, 3:16 am

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(H)al-sofy كتب:
Bird you are genious
so you wrote this one by your self
now, i believe that you are talented
ما شا لله عليك


Really .... thank you so much Hameeda......

Actually I didn't write alone .. but ofcourse I wrote it with your help......

And I Would believe in that tooooooooo.....

Thank You For Reading And Thank You Again For Appreciating It

I'm really so happy that you have read it and admired it

My Best Wishes to You to Be Successful in Your coming Life


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8default رد: MESSAGE TO HER في 19/10/2008, 1:33 am

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at last found a poem of yours bassam, do u know i've read it three times and i couldn't understand it all, it was a very nice poem that i liked, it expresses how a lover can be hurt by his beloved, it's an answer to a girl who is in my eyes considering love as a game, whenever she dreams she enters and whenever she admires she gets out, and u did what's right when u said
I swear to you, faithful I swear
My life, with you, will go no where

My love, to you, has been killed here

and u expressed about her situation in love in a perfect manner that tells us how much she plays by ur emotions an what i understood is that sometimes she pretends that she loves u and sometimes she pretends as if she didnt know u and that's why love coldn't find where does she place, and really i thought of u bassam as ........... because u said that u loved her without any base on which ur love must stand , but it is heart that says what can nver be heared but felt , and hearts lead to no way as u said

as a whole i admred ur poem so much and i wish that it was really u who wrote it bcause in fact i don't know any yemeni or even arabic person who can write english poems that prfect way, and if it was really u and i can never say that it was someone else because i felt that u were reading it in front of me with that humble voice and slight smile

at the end i wanted to say that She Is Just A Big Dumb if she found a person like ur case and pretended that she doesnt know u, all the people know u dear and i am sure that u'll find who is better than her

and i wish u returns to here and put more of ur poems and emotions

Age Night

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9default رد: MESSAGE TO HER في 25/10/2008, 2:31 am

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WOW...... What a girl you are? I can't believe it..... that's almost what I ment to say
But be sure that it's mine and I wrote it my self
any way thank you very much and I don't know what to reply
Cuz you talked about me I mean by the word


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10default رد: MESSAGE TO HER في 24/12/2008, 4:23 pm

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what a great words
wow you deserve a prize for it
what a boy??????????????????????????????????
accept my passing

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11default رد: MESSAGE TO HER في 25/12/2008, 5:10 pm

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to feel love it means that you are alive
to give love for those who do not deserve such thing it means that you are going to kill your heart but any way you still alive
do not regrad being faithful till the end just be happy for being honest till the end
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great words Wordsworth Al-Mardahy
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12default رد: MESSAGE TO HER في 25/12/2008, 8:47 pm

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giving love for those who donot desirve
i liked this statement

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13default رد: MESSAGE TO HER في 25/12/2008, 11:20 pm

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it seems to me that u Know what does it mean love !!!!!!
Love is the power to give and the willingness to foregive
and the thing that can not break it only makes you stronger

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SOUL OF LOVE I love you I love you I love you

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14default رد: MESSAGE TO HER في 27/12/2008, 2:16 pm

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انا بحب بابا وماما والوطن
وقبل الكل احب ربي
والله يسلمني ويسلمكم

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